Changed understand; You to understand that you, there were several options, so I just chose one because something had to be done about both the semi-colon and the capital Y. Changed people - They to just a small t on they. And lastly--please, no tilde just because you think it's cool or tricky--changed It's not~. to It's not. Grammar, mechanics and punctuation all matter. Stick with submitting actual quotes, not random things in your head.