Must be the Star Wars thing... It's classic. You are obviously Luke to this Pacey guy's Han Solo. So you're the stuff of preteen daydreams, cute, smart, non-threatening. Which is great and all, but not for princess Joey here, who is clearly smack dab in the middle of her bad boy phase.
There should be a semi colon after the word 'daydreams' instead of a comma. You've inserted an unnecessary space after the hyphen in 'non- threatening'. You can't start a sentence with 'Which is great and all'. And 'princess' should be capitalized. And you've typed 'here' instead of 'her'