One day, I woke up, like any other morning. Now this morning in particular was a beautiful, sunny Spring day. Looking out the window, I had an overwhelming feeling come over me. I was finally as peace with my life. One day, was today.
Awkwardly worded. Remove the comma after "I woke up'. You need a comma after 'Now' in the second sentence. And 'Spring' should not be capitalized. Change 'as peace' to 'at peace'.
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