I am in Pain. - Adinah Edwards

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My heart is fading away and my smiles are a thing of the past. My insides are crumbling and my eyes are swollen from poisonous tears. I am bruised to the bone, that are all broken and I look like death itself. I am in pain. From your paining remarks and your cruel statements. From your looks of disappointment. From the marks of your hard hand that is as worn as the energy in my soul. I am simply... in pain.

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dvorakdan 8 वर्षहरु,3 महिनाहरु अगाडि
I am bruised to the bone, that are all broken

Yeah, that's not good writing there. The three sentence fragments that start with From wouldn't cut it in English class either. The ideas are good, but a word like paining makes them less vibrant. I also am not sure what is "worn" in the last sentence, is it the hard hand? Also, I don't think "as worn as the energy in my soul" is really a good simile at the end there, but that's more of a personal opinion. Good writing mostly, a few touch ups away from very good, I think.
teilo 10 वर्षहरु,5 महिनाहरु अगाडि
This is a typing test. Not a diary.

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Score (WPM) यस उद्धारणका लागि वितरण. थप.

यसका लागि सर्वोत्तम अंकहरू typing test

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eventlogging 170.00 100%
samuraininja 132.93 97.9%
brainfreezy 127.75 97.4%
user263163 125.09 93.6%
lytewerk 124.21 96.5%
johnnrwayne 123.52 97.9%
mvan6543 122.82 94.7%
jpadtyping 122.51 95.8%
starl1ng 122.18 99.3%
stormspirit97 120.84 93.4%

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नाम WPM सट्टाई
elpatrongarcia 70.41 88.2%
mechazawa 67.07 93.8%
user107793 29.52 92.2%
mike7lap 37.78 96.3%
youdontwantokno 83.10 98.6%
emilyb18 58.77 90.3%
peepeepoopoo6969 93.92 95.3%
meganlocke 54.64 96.2%